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In some countries the age gap between parents and children is greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages

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Across many societies,
parents
 are having
children
 at a later age.
This
 increased age gap has a number of effects, including for the parent-child relationship. Despite clear disadvantages of
this
 trend, I would argue that the
advantages
 of having
children
 later in
life
 are more significant. Those that argue the disadvantages of having
children
 later in
life
 point to the benefits of having youthful
parents
. It is often easier for
children
 to have closer relationships with
parents
 who are not too distant in age.
This
 is true on a psychological and physical level: psychologically, younger
parents
 are more likely to have shared interests
while
 physically, younger
parents
 have more energy for playing games and sports with their
children
.
However
, I would argue that there are more
advantages
 of having
children
 later in
life
. Mature
parents
 are usually in a better financial position and are
therefore
 better able to cater to their child’s needs: schooling, excursions, activities, etc.
In contrast
, younger
parents
 are less likely to be established in their careers and not have the financial means to provide for their
children
. Older
parents
 are
also
 usually more emotionally stable and wise.
This
 creates a more steady and peaceful upbringing for their offspring,
as well as
 a store of knowledge and wisdom, which can be used to guide their
children
.
To conclude
,
while
 I acknowledge that having
children
 earlier has certain
advantages
 in terms of physical and psychological bonding, I would argue that, because of the financial and emotional stability that older
parents
 have, the
advantages
 of having
children
 later in
life
 exceed the disadvantages.
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