Write about the following topic: Some people say that the amount of noise that people make should be strictly controlled. Others say that people should be free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
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loudly
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in
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at
the
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hearing
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music
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noise
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pollution
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areas
.
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although
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people
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make
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have
parties
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level
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midnight to maintain Correct article usage
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quality
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