The shown Line graph below illustrates the condition of participation by club members to different courses. Summaries and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

This

line chart illustrates the participation trend of club members different in

activities

, namely Swimming,

Team

sports

, and

Gym

activities

from 1995 to 2015.

In

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overall

,

its

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it is

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clearly visible that

Team

sports

and

Gym

activities

have increased

while

,

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swimming activity has decreased significantly over the year. Both,

Team

sports

and

gym

activities

showed a similar pattern, they started to grow

since

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1995 and drastically surged in 2000,

that

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and that

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upward pattern continued until 2010. But

Team

sports

began to plummet in 2015. Meantime the

gym

activities

shown

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a

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less popularity in 2000 and indicated a slow growth rate until 2010 but surprisingly it ended up being the 2nd famous sport in the club, by the end of 2015.

In contrast

, swimming

activities

were the most attractive sport among the club members, which contributed almost 50% of membership subscriptions in 1995. But by the end of 2000, its attractiveness had fallen slightly and by the of 2010, it had plummeted sharply.

Then

, stabilized in 2015.