You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. there is a problem with photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot in your letter explain . what the problem is with your photos . say which photo you would like him or her to send you . explain why you need this Photo.
Dear Jack
I hope to find you well. After I have spent the most effective time with you on holiday, I thank you for accompanying me and creating the best memorable memory.
Unfortunately, when I wanted to show our
photos
, especially, those that took them to the ancient Castle to my parents, I realized that I had deleted them from my smartphone.
Fortunately, I recall that you took some photos
too. Hence
, I wish could have them if it is possible for to you send them to me, Besides
, that atmosphere was so historical and mysterious. Whereas
, my father is a historian lover, so I want to illustrate these photos
to him, because of the demonstration of its wonderful space. Furthermore
, I need them more, because I decided to two years ago that collect all the photos
of my trips that have in different places. Until I can hold an individual exhibition of my photos
in the main hall of Theatre City. My aim of holding this
exhibition is to raise the awareness of younger people about different places, where are spectacular scenery in our country.
please write me
soon, and I will be looking at them.
love
MikeChange preposition
to me
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task response
Ensure that all points mentioned in the prompt are addressed in the letter.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas more coherently to enhance the flow of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range and variety of vocabulary to make the letter more engaging.
grammatical range
Pay closer attention to sentence structure and grammar to improve clarity and accuracy.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,