Completing university is thought be syme to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and dveloping soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people believe that getting a

university

degree

opens many doors for your future

job

. Others,

however

, oppose

this

view by saying that soft

skills

along with

profound

knowledge

are more essential. I gravitate to the second camp,

who

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think

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that getting

experience

is crucial for the individual,

nevertheless

, both views will be elaborated on here. On the one hand, there are two key reasons why completing

university

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education is considered to be so important.

Firstly

, a diploma demonstrates that a student is interested in the field of study and possesses a great

knowledge

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it. Because

otherwise

, he wouldn’t be able to finish his studies.

Secondly

, people who have a

degree

are used to staying focused for a long period of time and

therefore

,

study

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effectively .

For instance

, big companies often look for individuals who have

university

degree

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degrees

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because they are often motivated and willing to improve their

skills

. On the other side of

an

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argument,

experience

and soft

skills

are

not

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no

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less important. If the person previously worked in the field

,

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or took related courses, they already have the practical

skills

that are needed.

Moreover

, the person is well aware of all the issues that can follow that

job

and has useful

knowledge

on how to actually solve them. As an example, for IT or related fields, a

degree

is not that crucial, because it gives just academic

knowledge

and not practical

skills

to receive an offer.

Whereas

one's

experience

can play an important role when it comes to getting the

job

. In summary, both sides of the argument regarding the different opinions on getting a good

job

have strong support. Even though a

university

degree

creates a strong base for

the

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future career, as far as I

myself

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am concerned,

experience

and soft

skills

are of utmost importance.