The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe, by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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this

bar chart

explain

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the average daily sold of 5 food items, which

ice

cream

, iced

coffee

, hot

coffee

soup

ans

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and

salad at the Vista Cafe in

summre

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summer

and

winter

. It is clear from the graph that the best seller in

summer

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the summer

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season is

ice

cream

and iced

coffee

are

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apply

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the

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while

hot

coffee

and

soup

were highest sold in

winter

according to

what is shown, In

winter

, hot

coffee

sales

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apply

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for the highest number of

servings

of Vista Cafe, around 75

servings

, but

soup

gets about 50

servings

Moreover

, iced

coffeein

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coffee in

summer had major

sale

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sales

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servings

wihle

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while

Ice

cream

servings

almost 35.

Whereas

salad

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the salad

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had same

same

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apply

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numbers of

sale

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the sale

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in both

season

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seasons

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However

soup

servings

in summer matched the

ice

cream

servings

winter

To sum up

, we could say that people prefer to buy hot food in

winter

and people love

eat

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to eat

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salad in both

season

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seasons

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ice, cream, coffee, soup, winter, servings with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

152 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe, by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many countries spend alot of money to make bicycles easier.Why? Is it the best solution for transport problems?

In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures that might be effective?

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11.Nowadays there is a growing amount of advertising aimed at children. Some people think this has negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?