The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of inhabitants of different nationalities residing in Australia,
whereas
the table shows demographical figures which are classified
according to
urban and rural areas. The initial impression from the pie chart is that the vast majority of
Australian
citizens claim their ancestry to be of
Australian
origin. It is
also
noticeable that most
Australian
people
, regardless of their ethnicity, are city dwellers.
According to
the pie chart,
Australian
ethnicity makes up nearly three-fourths of the total population.
This
is followed by the figure for
people
coming from the UK (7%) and New Zealand (3%). Residents of Chinese and Dutch ethnicity,
on the other hand
, made up a negligible 1-2%. As is seen from the table, roughly 80% of
people
from Australia and New Zealand live in cities,
whereas
only around 20% live in the countryside. A similar picture is evident in the figures for
people
from China and New Zealand, with their urban population amounting to a high of 90-99%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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