Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include: – Why you want to join the team – What you can do to assist – Queries related to the trip.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in the upcoming 3 days tour to Dubai
along with
my child. I am willing to be a part of this
trip as I have been to Dubai couple
of times in the past and can suggest prime tourist attractions within the city.
Change the article
a couple
Also
, I can recommend a few affordable and clean accomodations
for our stay in the beautiful city. I can Correct your spelling
accommodations
also
make arrangements for full meals - breakfast, lunch and dinner. Due to
large
network, I can arrange for group passes in advance for several sites at a concessional rate. Correct article usage
the large
For instance
, desert safari, dolphin show, underwater zoo and global village.
In order to make bookings for tickets I need few
details Correct article usage
a few
such
as total
number of people travelling and among them how many are children and adults? Any special dietary requirements and if anyone has Change the article
a total
the total
particular
allergy which Correct article usage
a particular
need
to be considered for the meal.
I Change the verb form
needs
ensure
you I will get you the best price in the town and I believe I could be of great help with Verb problem
assure
this
.
I hope you will consider my request and will accomodate
me Correct your spelling
accommodate
in
Change preposition
on
this
trip.
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down longer paragraphs into shorter ones to enhance readability.
coherence cohesion
Provide a brief introduction and conclusion to frame your letter effectively.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear structure, addressing the necessary points comprehensively.
task achievement
The tone is suitable and polite, demonstrating enthusiasm and a willingness to assist.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite