Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In
this
era, education
is an important aspect for an individual. Few citizens observe that the administration should give the funds to run universities
so that universities
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university
education
will be available for every person. I totally agree with this
statement and i
will discuss my reasons Change the capitalization
I
in -depth
in the subsequent paragraphs Correct your spelling
in-depth
and
Correct word choice
apply
lastly
, I will come to a logical conclusion.
To begin
with, the higher authorities of the nation
should pays
attention towards the Change the verb form
pay
universities
and the collages
to provide free Correct your spelling
colleges
education
for the nation
. To elaborate, undoubtedly if the goverment
Correct your spelling
government
provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
the
free Correct article usage
apply
education
to the citizens every person will hold tertiary education
. Further
, poor people
can get a chance to attain the universities
vocational courses. Fix the agreement mistake
university
Moreover
, there will be a decline in the umemployment
rate and Correct your spelling
unemployment
an
every citizen will have the basic knowledge. Remove the article
apply
Additionally
it will benefit Add a comma
Additionally,
alot
to those Correct your spelling
a lot
people
who's
income is very low like Change noun form
whose
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the schedule
schedule
cast or the poor caste Replace the word
scheduled
people
who never get a chance to grab the
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a
universities
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university
education
.
furthermore
, if every citizen has completed its
tertiary Correct pronoun usage
their
education
it will provides
numerious Change the verb form
provide
of
benefits to their lifestyle like they will Change preposition
apply
enchance
their soft skills, communication skills and personality Correct your spelling
enhance
devolpment
Correct your spelling
development
although
, they will get job
related to skill or profession and Add an article
a job
thus
this
will jump up the nation
economy. For example
, suppose in India the universities
and collage
Correct your spelling
college
education
is free it will give benefits to residents and the non residents
Add a hyphen
non-residents
also
and this
will allow the goverment
to generate income from Correct your spelling
government
non resident
Add a hyphen
non-resident
people
by coming here from various nation
and using various types of transportation, living facalities
and many more.
Conclusion Authorities should Correct your spelling
facilities
pays
attention towards Change the verb form
pay
universities
and collages to give free education
to the citizens so this
will incline the
employment and poor Correct article usage
apply
people
will get a chance in their life to change their futureSubmitted by samanjot88476 on
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