Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In
this
era,
education
is an important aspect for an individual. Few citizens observe that the administration should give the funds to run
universities
so that
universities
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education
will be available for every person. I totally agree with
this
statement and
i
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will discuss my reasons
in -depth
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in-depth
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in the subsequent paragraphs
and
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lastly
, I will come to a logical conclusion.
To begin
with, the higher authorities of the
nation
should
pays
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attention towards the
universities
and the
collages
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colleges
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to provide free
education
for the
nation
. To elaborate, undoubtedly if the
goverment
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government
provide
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the
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free
education
to the citizens every person will hold tertiary
education
.
Further
, poor
people
can get a chance to attain the
universities
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university
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vocational courses.
Moreover
, there will be a decline in the
umemployment
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unemployment
rate and
an
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every citizen will have the basic knowledge.
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it will benefit
alot
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a lot
to those
people
who's
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income is very low like
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schedule
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cast or the poor caste
people
who never get a chance to grab
the
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universities
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education
.
furthermore
, if every citizen has completed
its
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tertiary
education
it will
provides
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numerious
of
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benefits to their lifestyle like they will
enchance
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enhance
their soft skills, communication skills and personality
devolpment
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development
although
, they will get
job
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related to skill or profession and
thus
this
will jump up the
nation
economy.
For example
, suppose in India the
universities
and
collage
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college
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education
is free it will give benefits to residents and the
non residents
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also
and
this
will allow the
goverment
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government
to generate income from
non resident
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people
by coming here from various
nation
and using various types of transportation, living
facalities
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facilities
and many more. Conclusion Authorities should
pays
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attention towards
universities
and collages to give free
education
to the citizens so
this
will incline
the
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employment and poor
people
will get a chance in their life to change their future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • government funding
  • equitable education system
  • social mobility
  • talented individuals
  • higher education
  • prioritize
  • sustainable
  • alternative sources of funding
  • partnerships with businesses
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