Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In
this
era, Linking Words
education
is an important aspect for an individual. Few citizens observe that the administration should give the funds to run Use synonyms
universities
so that Use synonyms
Use synonyms
universities
Change the noun form
university
education
will be available for every person. I totally agree with Use synonyms
this
statement and Linking Words
i
will discuss my reasons Change the capitalization
I
in -depth
in the subsequent paragraphs Correct your spelling
in-depth
and
Correct word choice
apply
lastly
, I will come to a logical conclusion.
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To begin
with, the higher authorities of the Linking Words
nation
should Use synonyms
pays
attention towards the Change the verb form
pay
universities
and the Use synonyms
collages
to provide free Correct your spelling
colleges
education
for the Use synonyms
nation
. To elaborate, undoubtedly if the Use synonyms
goverment
Correct your spelling
government
provide
Correct subject-verb agreement
provides
the
free Correct article usage
apply
education
to the citizens every person will hold tertiary Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
Further
, poor Linking Words
people
can get a chance to attain the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
universities
vocational courses. Fix the agreement mistake
university
Moreover
, there will be a decline in the Linking Words
umemployment
rate and Correct your spelling
unemployment
an
every citizen will have the basic knowledge. Remove the article
apply
Linking Words
Additionally
it will benefit Add a comma
Additionally,
alot
to those Correct your spelling
a lot
people
Use synonyms
who's
income is very low like Change noun form
whose
Correct article usage
the schedule
schedule
cast or the poor caste Replace the word
scheduled
people
who never get a chance to grab Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
a
Use synonyms
universities
Change the noun form
university
education
.
Use synonyms
furthermore
, if every citizen has completed Linking Words
its
tertiary Correct pronoun usage
their
education
it will Use synonyms
provides
numerious Change the verb form
provide
of
benefits to their lifestyle like they will Change preposition
apply
enchance
their soft skills, communication skills and personality Correct your spelling
enhance
devolpment
Correct your spelling
development
although
, they will get Linking Words
job
related to skill or profession and Add an article
a job
thus
Linking Words
this
will jump up the Linking Words
nation
economy. Use synonyms
For example
, suppose in India the Linking Words
universities
and Use synonyms
collage
Correct your spelling
college
education
is free it will give benefits to residents and the Use synonyms
non residents
Add a hyphen
non-residents
also
and Linking Words
this
will allow the Linking Words
goverment
to generate income from Correct your spelling
government
non resident
Add a hyphen
non-resident
people
by coming here from various Use synonyms
nation
and using various types of transportation, living Use synonyms
facalities
and many more.
Conclusion Authorities should Correct your spelling
facilities
pays
attention towards Change the verb form
pay
universities
and collages to give free Use synonyms
education
to the citizens so Use synonyms
this
will incline Linking Words
the
employment and poor Correct article usage
apply
people
will get a chance in their life to change their futureUse synonyms
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