The diagram below shows information about carbon dioxide emissions for popular private jets
The table depicts information about
fuel
consumptions
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consumption
carbon
dioxide
production
, and flight
cost
per hour
in nine different aircraft. Overall
, consumption
of fuel
has positive
correlation with Add an article
a positive
the
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carbon
dioxide
production
, while
the cost
of flight
varies in three
different categories.
To begin
with, Gulfstream III scores the highest consumption
of fuel
(488 gallons of fuels
per Fix the agreement mistake
fuel
hour
) and most producing carbon
dioxide
(10,078 pounds per hour
). In addition
, fuel
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the fuel
consumption
and carbon
dioxide
production
of Gulfstream III is
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are
three
times higher than Cessna CJ II as
the lowest.
Meanwhile, the Change preposition
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flight
cost
is divided into three
different categories. First
category, Chesna CJ II, Beechjet 182, and Hawker 400XP Add an article
The first
cost
$2750 for an hour
flight
. Second category, although
Hawker 800XP shares the same consumption
of fuel
and carbon
production
, its flight
cost
is higher than Hawker 400XP at $4500 alongside Cessna Citation XLS and Learjet 60. Last
category, the Change the article
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three
greatest consumer
of Change to a plural noun
consumers
fuel
and producer
of Fix the agreement mistake
producers
carbon
dioxide
marks the highest flying cost
at $6750.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, carbon, dioxide, production, flight, cost, hour, consumption, three with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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