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The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.
The bar chart and table illustrate people under 30 years old who read what kinds of
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 and how many
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 they have read. In terms of how to read
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, most people choose printed
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, about 85% aged 25-29 and 72% aged 16-24 preferring
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, there are similar percentages of the public choosing to read e-
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 and listen to audiobooks, which are lower than the
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 in printed
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. All readers from three age groups are recorded under 20% using these two ways. In 2012, teenagers in the age
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 16-17 had read the most
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,
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 of 12
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 for each one. Teenagers older than 18 had read the same number of
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, one less than 16-17
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. Simultaneously, the 16-17
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 would read almost all contents (90%) in a book, exceeding the 18-29
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 by 10%.
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, teenagers aged 16-17 read more
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 than the other two age groups and printed
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 are popular ways to read.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, group with synonyms.
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