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Some scientist think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientist think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, Some scientists suggest that there is
life
 on other
planets
 and we have to deal with it by contacting other
planets
 ,
while
 others believe that it is very risky. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both views and illustrate my opinion.
To begin
 with, Contacting other
planets
 is not a reasonable idea because
this
 experience will cost a huge amount of money and it would be better to use
this
 money to tackle other problems on Earth like climate change issues.
Moreover
, by 1975 the Soviet Union launched satellites and spacecraft in order to find any sort of
life
 in the outer atmosphere but the results were disappointing and brought about negative changes in their economic situation.
Therefore
, I'm fairly certain that any form of connection with other
planets
 is worthless because of the aforementioned reason that I illustrated.
On the other hand
, Some scientists justify
this
 kind of experience.
This
 is because they think that
life
 on Earth might be ended , and
as a result
 , we have to find other suitable
planets
 to live in.
Additionally
, because of decreasing some vital elements on our planet like petrol, oils and gold.
Hence
, one of the researchers pointed out that to address
this
 problem attempting to communicate with other
planets
 as on some
planets
 these elements are affordable.
On the contrary
, NASA did not consider
this
 claim because there is no robust evidence about
this
 claim and in order to avoid any sort of catastrophes on the spacecraft.
Therefore
, I partly disagree with any sort of communication to find any kind of
life
 on other
planets
 so as to be in a formidable disaster that may jeopardize our planet. In a nutshell,
although
 a lot of trials contribute to a great exploration, in some issues these trials can lead to disasters and I justified that in
this
 essay.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly states the topic and your stance on it. Provide a roadmap of what you will discuss in the body paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
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lexical resource
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