The best way to learn a foreign language is self-study online. To what do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
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that the best
way
to learn
language
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a language
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is studying themselves in online,
while
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other
people
believe the best
way
is to study with
others
in
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offline.
Although
self-studying online is
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effective
way
to acquire
language
skills,
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I totally agree with
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idea
of
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studying with
others
in
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office
plays a more crucial role
to be
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fluent in
foreign
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language
. First of all, Self-studying online is
effective
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an effective
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way
because
the
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individuals can study regardless of time and place.
For instance
, many
people
use ways
such
as listening and shadowing movies or
radios
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because they can obtain the studying materials easily by only searching the Internet. They can even
listen
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listen to
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the foreign
language
while
they commute to school or
worker
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place on the bus, subway, etc.
However
, studying with
others
is
better
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a better
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way
to acquire
language
skills because of some reasons. Studying with
others
is the
way
that
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individuals can get
feedbacks
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feedback
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.
People
who learn
new
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language
can feel confused because first-
language
and
second-
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language
have lots of differences and usually, second-
language
learner
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learners
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don't know well about whether they are using proper words in
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circumstances or their writing has no grammar mistakes.
For instance
, many
people
use
social-apps
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social apps
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to communicate with foreigners because they can get
feedbacks
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which
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pronounciation they have to fix or which grammar mistakes
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their writing
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.
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, not only
the
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individuals can be confident about speaking
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foreing
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foreign
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but
also
they can
get
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interest. In conclusion, self-studying online is
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good
way
becasue
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because
they can invest
anytime
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any time
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when they want to study.
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, studying with
others
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offline is the best
way
because they can get
feedbacks
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about their
lanuguage
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language
skills.
Also
, it is the one
way
that
people
can be more confident and have an interest
about
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language
.
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