The Graph Below Shows the Number of Shops that Closed and The Number of New Shops that Opened in One Country Between 2011 and 2018

A glance at the line chart reveals how many

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were set up and turned down in one country during the period from 2011 to 2018.  

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of shop openings and closures indicated a downward trend from 2011 to 2018, with considerable fluctuations in the middle of the time. The

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of shop openings was larger than the

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of shop closures at the beginning;

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.   First of all, there were 8500

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opened in 2011 and a rapid dip

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only 4000 in 2012, and

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the quantity of

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went up to slightly higher than 6000. After an approximated 2000

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declined in 2015 and had similar numbers until 2017, it

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decreased to 4000

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.   In terms of the

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of closures, there were just above 6,000 in 2011 and

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remained at a similar level in 2014, with a small increment up to a little bit higher than 7,000

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. After that, a sudden fall in the

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of

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was observed, down to around 500. At

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, the

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of

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surged back to 5000 in 2014 and remained constant till 2018.