Some people believe that a great difference in age between people and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world, People are categorized

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Grown-ups starting from 18 years

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old, thus

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can get on four wheels, fulfill civil rights and even find a soulmate

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some dissatisfied with

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.

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essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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with,

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the Reality

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of survival as

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a human

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should begin as soon as the

child

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is ready. As we know

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is a prime age and it's really important that

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child

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a child

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begins to manifest

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his

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adultism at a very early age

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some

part

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of the earth regard starting as early as 15 and some bring it to the late year 18.

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it has

advantage

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the advantage

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to stay

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of staying

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until almost twenty, to

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enough time to prepare towards

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also

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has

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a disadvantage

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disadvantage

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disadvantages

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as the

child

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will have the experience of

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too

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and may take a

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before he or she understands the assignment.

Thesame

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early to

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the

advantage

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advantages

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can be numerous but the Disadvantage is having less healthy and mental capacity to cope with the situations in

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world. Meanwhile ,

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regarded as

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a

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Grown-ups

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Grown-up

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is saddled with responsibility . Early training for children is important.

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example

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having a skill which is necessary to generate income for the individual. Nowadays once you are 18 it is believed that you should

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have

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having required skills which is necessary for

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survival.

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is the key to

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regarded as

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a grown

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grown up

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grown-up

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man or woman . In my opinion,

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agree that

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children at the almost twentieth year should be regarded as a

fully fledged

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fully-fledged

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man

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men

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or

woman

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women

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but it's better to gradually introduce

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at

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early age by saddling the children with some simple

task

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tasks

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.

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the

the

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child

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is preparing towards

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it will be worth a

while

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to notice that the

child

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is ready to take the challenge of moving towards the new stage of life.