characterostics we are born with have more influence on our personality and devolpment than experiences

Numerous studies have found that the traits of

personality

we are born with have more impact on our character and personal development than the

experiences

we collect during our lifetime. As far as I am concerned, even if both of these views have their own rights, it is my belief that the second one is more influential.

To begin

with, there is no denying that our genes strongly affect our

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since we were tiny children. Is part of our DNA and we inherit a percentage of our

personality

from our relatives,

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could leave a mark on our growth.

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also

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environment we are born could

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our attitude and the way we think or make

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.

For example

, we can have similar traits

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our parents,

such

as being outgoing, having

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strong

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or,

on the contrary

shy and insecure.

Nonetheless

, it could have the potential to lead us to get stuck in our thoughts and behavior, and not

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enough risks to really stretch ourselves or put ourselves in situations that challenge us.

On the other hand

, the

experiences

we have during our existence, have a massive effect on our

personality

and

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us the opportunity to really discover our hidden

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, and

also

some new details of our individuality. It is widely known that the more adventures we have in our lives, the more chance we will

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as individuals. Staying in our comfort zone often gives us a sense of control and stability, but it does not lead to progress.

For instance

, youngsters who engaged in a year studying abroad, have developed new abilities in communication and

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new cultures.

To conclude

, I reiterate my statement by saying that the

experiences

we have in our life, could be an overwhelmingly positive development for our

personality

. We are certainly influenced by our genes and characteristics we have since we were born, but we benefit from

experiences

a huge amount of things,

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we

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identify more

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strengths, we can learn

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our

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and enhance ourselves and we could combat our fears.

As a result

,

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is a viable and workable option to grow and improve our

personality

.