the diagram below shows information aboaut carbon dioxide emission for popular private jets. ummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaparisons where relevant
The table given illustrates the carbon dioxide emission of nine different private aircraft reported with the
fuel
and flight cost
used per hour. Overall
, Gulfstream III which needs a lot of fuel
is the most polluting private aircraft with the most expensive expenditure. On the other hand
, the Cessna CJ II produce the least carbon dioxide in the air with the cheapest flight cost
.
To begin
with, the air is most polluted by 10,0780 (lbs
CO2/hr
) produced by Gulfestream
III which needs 488 Correct your spelling
Gulfstream
gallons
of fuel
with a total costof
$6,750 per hour, a similar Correct your spelling
cost of
cost
that is
needed by Gulfstream 550 and Challenger 605. Gulfstream 550 produces 8,342 (lbs
CO2/hr
) needs 378 gallons
of fuel
while
Challenger 605 produce 6,180 (lbs
CO2/hr
) need 280 gallons
of fuel
.
Next,
Cessna Citation XLS as the cheapest private jet witha
$2,700 flight Correct your spelling
with a
cost
/hour and 136 gallons
fuel
/hr
usage, produced 3,002 (lbs
CO2/hr
). With a similar cost
, Beechjet 400 and Hawker 400XP produced 4,017 and 4,149 (lbs
CO2/hr
) respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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