You’re visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about your life now Give him/her details of your visit Arrange how you can meet.

Dear Abc, Hope you and your family are doing well. Well, I am writing

this

email to you regarding fixing a meeting for us, if possible.

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it has been 7 years now, still I have very clear memories of a time when you and I worked together at Subway, Riverside Road, Wasaga Beach. Nowadays, every person has a very hectic schedule and I am no exception. I am hustling a lot every day, managing the 4 stores that I own now. Recently, my parents have come to Toronto to visit me.

Therefore

, I decided to spare some time for them, to show them the beautiful places around

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Ontario. I am planning to visit the Blue Mountains on November 24, 2023, and I will be staying overnight there

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the next day we will be

helding

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holding

heading

our trip towards Wasaga Beach. Fortunately, I am getting a chance to meet my best colleague once again and I don't want to miss

this

train at any cost.

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, we can arrange breakfast with you on the coast of Wasaga Beach on November

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25, 2023, you can meet my parents as well. We all are excited to see you, especially me. Looking forward to your reply, Navneet.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single idea or theme for greater clarity.

task achievement

While your response generally meets the task requirements, expanding on the details of your life now and providing more specific information about your visit could enhance the task achievement score.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

205 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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