The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
The line graph depicts the dash of
waste
manufactured by 3 companies from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, it is noticeable that company
A was the most popular fabric before 2012 when company
C replaced it and obtained the highest amount of waste
, whereas
company
B lowest. Furthermore
, company
A and B showed downward trends, Fix the agreement mistake
companies
while
company
C upward trends.
To begin
with company
A, it was Capitalize word
Company
on
Change preposition
at
peak
which accounted for 12 in 2000 . Add an article
the peak
a peak
Therefore
, it decreased gradually to 8 in the final years. In terms of company
B
it increased to approximately 10 in 2005 before falling Add a comma
B,
up
to 3 in the next 10 years and was the Change preposition
apply
company
which had the smallest amount of waste
throughout the period.
With regards to company
C, it accounted for under 3 which rose marginally to 6 in 2005. Ultimately, it increased progressively to 11 roughly in the final years and was the fabric which obtained the biggest amount of waste
over the period in question.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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