Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

Deforestation

caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the

enviroment

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environment

. Personally, I think that the

goverment

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government

can be done to solve

this

problem

by

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some ways that I shall explain in more detail in

this

essay.

To begin

,

it is clear that

the environment will be more safe if

deforestation

is controlled. Nowadays, the

deforestation

activities of humans which

sever for

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serve

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different purposes increasingly

becomes

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become

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popular all over the world .

For example

, in my country, Vietnam, several individuals have cut the

tree

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trees

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in forests to earn money illegally. Another case,

because

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is because

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of the increase of the population in the remote areas where local

people

lack awareness.

This

lead

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leads

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to

deforestation

actions for houses.

Consequently

, the size of forests more and more

decrease

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decreases

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,

the

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and the

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environment

has

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is

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a threat, which

cause

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causes

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many natural disasters

such

as blood, drought,

earthquake

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earthquakes

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and so on.

On the other hand

, the

goverment

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government

should produce force laws to punish those who

involve

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are involved

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demolishing

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in demolishing

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forest

activities. To illustrate, these years,

Vietnamese

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government has issued the rule that if a person

sales

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sells

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or exploits natural wood illegally, he or she will be imprisoned

up

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for up

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to 50 years.

Thank

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to

this

law the number of

people

who

destroys

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destroy

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forests has declined significantly.

Moreover

, I

belive

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believe

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that

encorage

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encourage

encourages

residents to plant

forest

trees is

also

a

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best way to address the problem of

the

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apply

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deforestation

.

For instance

, in Vietnam, the government has hired local

people

to plant and take care

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of forest

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forest

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forests

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.

This

way not only creates more fine jobs for residents but

also

contribute

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contributes

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to has

expension

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expansion

of

forest

area. In conclusion, in

this

essay, I would like to say that to prevent the

deforestation

caused by

human

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humans

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from different countries worldwide with serious results for the

enviroment

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environment

the

goverment

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government

should promulgate force laws to limit

deforestation

pursuits and

encorage

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encourage

local

people

plant

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to plant

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forest

trees to enlarge size of

forest

.