Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Some say that

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the most influential on a child's

future

while

others argue that

experiences

as a teenager are more important.

While

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human's talents and abilities are mostly discovered during the

first

5

years

, I personally believe that the

years

between 13-19

years

have a more profound impact on our lives because of the

career

choice

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that we make in

this

time. In the

first

few

years

, our brain develops tremendously and the child can learn at the highest rate in

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to all other life periods, resulting in the name "the golden

years

".

As a result

, a human's

potentials

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and talents

is

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mostly

be

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activated and discovered in

this

stage.

For example

, the musical talent of Mozart was discovered when he was only three and from

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point

, he received intensive training, which

lead

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to his successful

career

as an adult.

However

, most childhood memories will be forgotten when children get older and

for

this

reason, the

experiences

at these ages will not have

the

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deep impact

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to

experiences

in the teenage

years

.

On the other hand

, the teenage

period

is the time when a person

choose

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the

future

career

path for the

future

lives. The reason is that, in opposed to inactive learning processes as a child,

this

period

is the time when a student can actively

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their preferences and invest in their favourite fields, which lead to their

first

goals in their careers.

Moreover

, it's possible that the adolescent choose to follow a different path than their natural talents.

For example

, despite his interest in literature and poetry, at the age of 19, Nobel chose to follow his family's

bussiness

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business

after his father's death to

maitain

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maintain

his

bussiness

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business

. In conclusion, even though the

first

five

years

can be a crucial

period

in children's lives, the

experiences

that they have as a teenager have a deeper influence on their

life

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in the

future

for

this

is the

period

of

career

path formation.