our friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

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Dear Manthan, I am writing

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letter to let you know about the changes that have been made to our movie plan. I got an email from my manager. He informed me I must meet the stakeholders

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Monday at the Winnipeg office.

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, I have to reach there tomorrow. I feel sad for not executing our movie plan but I have figured out your company. I had a word with Faruq my

cousin

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brother. You met him at my birthday party. Yesterday he came to my place to spend his school vacation. I suggest you take him with you and watch the movie. He is

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very fond of theatre and will not let you feel bored. I assure you you will love his company.

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, he has a brand new Crola car, he will take you from your home and

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you guys can easily commute to the cinema hall. Best Regards Navdeep Kaur

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task response

Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt. In this case, the letter should clearly communicate the change in plans and the suggestion of having the friend's cousin go to the movie instead.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is somewhat clear, but it could benefit from more cohesive markers to connect the ideas more explicitly.

lexical resource

The letter demonstrates a fairly good range of vocabulary, but there is room to incorporate more varied and nuanced expressions.

grammatical range

The letter showcases a reasonable level of grammatical accuracy, but some sentence structures and tenses could be refined for greater precision and fluency.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

158 words

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our friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centers is for privately owned cars to be banned, others however, think this is an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehical will be passenger. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?