Your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he/she is doing about celebrating New Year in different countries. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . say how important New Year is your people in your country . describe how new your is celebrated in your country . explain what you like about New Year celebration in your country

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Dear Jack I hope to find you well. I was surprised when I received your email. I will help you to find effective information about our celebrating New
Year
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. As you know, I live in a historical and ancient country.
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our celebration related to our history is crucial for us. Usually, the people of my country contribute in holding celebrating the New w
Year
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well, because the families meet each other in a unit place,
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in a grandparent's house after they have not had enough time to visit each other during the
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. But the most important factor to hold it would be the importance of our traditional culture especially in cooking local cuisine and wearing traditional clothes. Consistently, we try to hold it in the house or neighbourhood with our neighbours. We provide a variety of food and drinks in our yard, so our neighbours can come here and enjoy it, dancing and communicating create the best time for us. In fact, what I like the most about it, is meeting the members of my family at a certain time by changing the
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, it would be the favourite activity among people. I am hearing to look to you
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if you have other questions. Love Peter
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Address the recipient with an appropriate greeting and closing in order to maintain a formal tone in the letter.
lexical resource
Expand vocabulary and use more precise and varied expressions to enhance the richness of the letter.
grammatical range
Focus on sentence structure, use a variety of sentence types, and work on accuracy in grammar.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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