You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home You want to give your opinion about this Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper In your letter Explain how you learnt about these plans Say what you think of the park, give your opinions on the plans

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing you

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letter regarding the new apartments that will be built at

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Central Park, and I imagine that would be a good story for your journal. A very close friend, who is one of the engineers of the construction, presented to me the initial blueprint of the project, and I could not believe it. Unfortunately, the entire space will

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new building will

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place. In my point of view,

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Central Park is the most beautiful green area in our city. It is not only a place for family meetings, or to practice sports, but

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a home of numerous animals, and everything will be gone until the end of March/23. I believe that

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construction is going to be a huge mistake, and the people of our city will be in pain

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the end of

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amazing place.

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, there are a series of options where

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apartment could be constructed. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Lucas Campos

lucasb7zTue Nov 07 2023

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greeting and closing

The greeting and closing should be formal and appropriate for a letter to the editor of a newspaper.

logical structure

The logical structure of the letter needs improvement to better convey the message.

task response

The response does not fully address all aspects of the task. It should offer more detailed opinions about the plans for the new apartments and provide reasons for these opinions.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary and expressions to enhance the overall lexical resource of the letter.

grammatical range

The grammatical range and accuracy could be improved, especially in sentence structure and verb tenses.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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You are planning to attend a course in another country. Write a letter to the college administration. In your letter: •Ask about the course details. •Inquire about the accommodation options. •Request information on the local area

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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people ate only the local food produced by farmers.

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