Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What is the main effect of this?

Nowadays, more and more people are suffering from overweight. recently,

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Foundation has confirmed that obesity is a general trend during

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time of

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.

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essay displays the primary reason

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how

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why

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overweight arises

amongst

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in

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society.

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,

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essay

also

includes the point of effects that may be caused by

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phenomenon.

Firstly

, to find the essential background of why

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issue occurs, there are numerous research related to

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problem overviewing

full

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display of

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causes and effects. Recent studies show that the main cause of

this

issue is

food-and-beverage

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food and beverage

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options. Several researchers believe foods, like

junk-foods

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junk foods

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, are contributing to the largest portion of

problem

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. They believe that they measure

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spectrum of weight by calculating calories (

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kcal

) in every

cuisines

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that people consume. Most

of

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calories are taken from nutrition;

such

as fat and carbohydrate.

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, whether foods or drinks like burgers and pizza

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contain those aspects

are

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considerably important to measure. Since the rise of junk-food vendors

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increasing sharply,

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background is out of

question

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.

Secondly

, the crucial part of

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on health perspectives. Human well-being will be sacrificed in

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detrimental phenomenon since

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eating

habbit

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habit

is soaring for the next few decades. Society

tend

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to work less as their bodies are

not

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no

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longer able to lift some

job-fields

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job fields

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that require more

efforts

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effort

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.

For instance

, construction workers and officers demand regular bodies as these companies ask for more moves and

works

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.

Therefore

, the effect of

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over-gaining weight will cause lots of

troubles

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.

To conclude

,

This

raising

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trend is mainly caused by unhealthy

habit

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habits

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of people in choosing and selecting foods

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on

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their

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daily basis.

Moreover

, health and work are mostly affected by

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issue resulting

more

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troubles to come.