Some charts are used to show predictions of the future, estimates of the past and projections of the future

Some charts are used to show predictions of the future, estimates of the past and projections of the future
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The chart describes the delta of the ocean surface for 300 years, between 1800 and 2100, divided into three parts: the predicted data before 1870, the real data from 1870 to around 2000, and the estimated data from early 2000. In general, sea level difference is increasing year by year, especially in the 21st century. Started with negative values in 1800 for both minimum, around -110
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, and maximum, about -200
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, which meant that all of the ocean surface on earth went down. It remained constant until 1870.
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, in the second period, the difference in the height of the ocean was negative until 1990. In 1900, the highest and lowest points were close, which means the increase in sea level was relatively equal all over the world to the end of the second period. The sea level reached a positive value in 2000 and not only will grow exponentially after 2000, but
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the scope of the maximum and minimum delta will probably be broader. It is estimated to reach above 200
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and 500
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as the lowest and highest changes in 2100.
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