The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008

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graph depicts the US government's spending on research on 5 categories over 28 years.

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figure experienced an upward trend.

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there was a significant change in health, the opposite could be seen in the remainders. Standing at 8

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, most of the money was invested in health in 1980,

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the least belonged to energy with only 3

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number slightly decreased by 7

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in 1984, it rocked and hit its highest point at 21

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in 2004

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declined moderately by 19

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in 2008.

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, before moderately increasing to 6

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at the end

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of the observed period, the amount of budget for energy remained stable at 3

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over 12 years.

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, beginning with 7

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, others and space shared the same budget, in 1980,

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numbers grew unevenly from 1998 to 2000. After experiencing the same trend, other and space remained stable in 2008, at 10 and 7 respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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162 words

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funding levels
government expenditure
trend analysis
budget allocation
inflation-adjusted dollars
historic highs/lows
research grants
public investment
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sector-specific spending
economic downturn
national priorities
scientific advancement
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The graph below gives information about U.S government spending on research between 1980 and 2008

Directors and managers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism of their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.