In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own countries. Nowadays, they have more opportunities to study abroad. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this development?
Students
who attended university in the past usually choose their own countries
' universities but more students
these days have more opportunities
to leave their countries
and pursue their degrees.
Overview, there will be advantages and disadvantages of this
opportunity. Students
of course will have better access to their education and increase their career prospects in the future. Cultural exchanges might also
happen during their studies and enhance their knowledge regarding other cultures
. However
, these opportunities
might reduce the number of talents in one country which might affect their countries
' future.
Foreign students
will have more insight into other countries
' cultures
. This
cultural exchange can be a good experience for the students
as it will open their minds towards different cultures
. This
means hostility towards other cultures
can be reduced. Studying abroad also
can help these younger generations to have better access towards a good education system than in their own countries
. This
eventually will make their portfolio better and increase their career prospects in the future. For example
, Lots of Indonesian students
every year go to countries
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like Singapore or Australia to get a degree as their education systems are better acknowledged by other countries
.
These days opportunities
for studying abroad are mostly available online and lots of scholarships available make these scholars choose to pursue their educations abroad. However
, it might reduce the number of talented students
in the country as most of them go abroad and leave their countries
. Moreover
, the majority of these students
even make decisions to change their nationality as the work opportunities
are far better outside. For example
, In Indonesia, every year millions of Indonesian students
change their nationalities to Singaporean as they find the wages or the living standards are higher than in Indonesia. This
causes a lack of talent in Indonesia as most of them prefer to live and contribute their talents to other countries
.
To conclude
, the advantages of this
development have huge benefits for these students
but it can also
have a drawback towards the country.Submitted by lavenia34808 on
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