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The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table data below shows the top ten Internet users by country in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the data of 10 countries having the highest metrics of
Internet
users
 in the year 2016. It can be seen that 2 big Asian nations held significant positions in the absolute numbers of
people
 signing in the
Internet
, China and India respectively. The lowest figures of accounts on online
network
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networks
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,
on the other hand
, were attributed to
UK
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the UK
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 and Mexico. Looking at the table for more details,
although
 there were more than 700k Chinese
people
 using
Internet
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the Internet
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,sixfold the one of Japan, the percentage of
Internet
users
 in China witnessed a lower result compared to Japanese, 52.2% and 91.1% respectively.
In addition
, the U.S. was ranked in
top
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the top
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 3 with approximately 300K, equivalent
of
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 88.5% of
population
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the population
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 which surpassed China and India. Regarding countries owning lower than 100k
people
 registering to access cyberspace, Nigeria occupied the 6th one with nearly 86m
users
 or 46.6% of the Nigerian followed by Germany with more than 70M
users
. Notably, though Mexico was not the one having the lowest population, it was listed as the 10th nation with merely 58%
people
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of people
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 accessing the
Internet
.
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