Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than other ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Old building preservation has always been of great debate.
Although
some individuals believe in either demolishing or saving all kinds of decrepit buildings, I agree with the view that some cultural Linking Words
monuments
are worth saving.
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To begin
with, cultural heritage is what individuals refer to as to foster a sense of identity. Linking Words
accordingly
, there are numerous ways to keep these values over time as cultural richness presents itself in many parts of society and region, historical construction being one of them. Linking Words
Consequently
, preserving Linking Words
such
constructions would contribute to saving traditional values and passing them down from generation to generation. Linking Words
For instance
, anyone talking about Italy can think of the Pizza Bridge. It is obvious that destroying Linking Words
such
magnificent and precious can have a negative impact on preserving the country's history.
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However
, not all of the old Linking Words
monuments
are worth maintaining over time Use synonyms
due to
the unfruitfulness of the minority . to clarify, some of these constructions are too destructed to be saved and Linking Words
due to
their unacceptable approach, they are not many tourist attractions. Linking Words
Moreover
, if societies exert to keep every decrepit structure alive, an enormous amount of resources is required to be dedicated to Linking Words
such
maintenance projects. To cite an example, Britain governors once believed in allocating the majority of their authority to save old Linking Words
monuments
and after a decade they were faced with a considerable amount of financial conflicts.
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To conclude
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Although
historical Linking Words
monuments
are of great traditional value, we cannot exert to keep either all of them or none alive. Use synonyms
As a result
, I strongly agree that people should put adequate effort into saving some of them.Linking Words
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