Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
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galleries
are no longer important. In my opinion, the existence of these Use synonyms
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is an indispensable part.
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museums
or Use synonyms
art
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galleries
are unnecessary. Because, the internet allows them to search for almost all the Use synonyms
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they need, including Use synonyms
information
about historical objects or works of Use synonyms
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. They can find Use synonyms
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information
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websites Use synonyms
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as Wikimedia. Linking Words
Therefore
, they only need to stay at home Linking Words
instead
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places
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means that they can save both their effort and their time.
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However
, there are many reasons why some Linking Words
people
recognize that retaining these Use synonyms
places
can bring numerous positive aspects. First of all, these Use synonyms
places
can make gaining knowledge more interesting and effective. Use synonyms
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, when they go there, they not only can look at objects directly but can Linking Words
also
apprehend valuable knowledge with the help of more well-informed Linking Words
people
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, these Linking Words
places
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also
have the potential to attract many foreign tourists. Because the designs of Linking Words
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galleries
are usually based on a country’s architectural style. Use synonyms
This
can make foreign tourists want to enjoy exploring and sightseeing. In my view, Linking Words
this
may lead to not only tourism industry development but Linking Words
also
to the expansion of traditional culture to international friends. Take Independence Palace as an example, foreign tourists visiting Linking Words
this
place are really surprised and excited about its unique structure which was completely constructed by Vietnamese citizens.
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its tourism, I strongly believe that public Linking Words
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galleries
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