Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will be no longer necessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many
people
believe that historical objects or works of art
can be found on the Internet so some places
such
as museums
and art
galleries
are no longer important. In my opinion, the existence of these places
is an indispensable part.
Some people
think that museums
or art
galleries
are unnecessary. Because, the internet allows them to search for almost all the information
they need, including information
about historical objects or works of art
. They can find this
information
by using search engines like Google, YouTube or several information
websites such
as Wikimedia. Therefore
, they only need to stay at home instead
of having to go to such
places
. This
means that they can save both their effort and their time.
However
, there are many reasons why some people
recognize that retaining these places
can bring numerous positive aspects. First of all, these places
can make gaining knowledge more interesting and effective. For example
, when they go there, they not only can look at objects directly but can also
apprehend valuable knowledge with the help of more well-informed people
. Moreover
, these places
also
have the potential to attract many foreign tourists. Because the designs of museums
and art
galleries
are usually based on a country’s architectural style. This
can make foreign tourists want to enjoy exploring and sightseeing. In my view, this
may lead to not only tourism industry development but also
to the expansion of traditional culture to international friends. Take Independence Palace as an example, foreign tourists visiting this
place are really surprised and excited about its unique structure which was completely constructed by Vietnamese citizens.
In conclusion, because of the important roles that public museums
and art
galleries
play in the preservation of a country’s heritage as well as
its tourism, I strongly believe that public museums
and art
galleries
play an extremely critical role.Submitted by weezel on
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