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It is generally believed that some people are born with talents, for instance sport or music, and others are not. however, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person. discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #talents #sport #music #child #person
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ever
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person
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meet
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 a
person
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 life, who was naturally good at a specific
hobbie
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hobby
hobbies
, without even trying.
This
 makes
people
 question, if children who are not gifted with a specific talent are still able to achieve the same
level
, as a gifted child. I believe that everyone can achieve the same
level
 in a certain hobby, which I will explain.
Furthermore
, I will be looking at both sides of
this
 argument in the following essay. On one hand, when a
person
 is gifted in something, when the
person
 starts dedicating more
time
 to that activity, they will improve in a faster
time
then
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 someone who is not gifted.
For instance
, my childhood friend Noah, already in kindergarten used to be the fastest
person
 in the one hundred meter race. Without
triyng
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trying
 he would win against everyone, by a big difference.
Then
 when he got older he took
runnning
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running
 lessons and
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 massive improvements in his running
time
, in a
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short
 amount of
time
. For a
non gifted
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non-gifted
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person
, being able to achieve his running
time
, with
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shourt
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short
 amount of training would be nearly
impossibly
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.
Additionally
, when a
person
 has natural talents, the results will motivate the
person
, causing the
person
 to
work
 even harder. A
person
 who starts at zero
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 will find it harder to get motivated because at the start the
person
 will not see results.
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, it is harder for normal
people
 to achieve the same
level
 as talented
people
 because talented
people
 achieve better
reults
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results
 faster and will,
also
 be more motivated
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 non
talanted
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talented
people
.
On the other hand
, through hard
work
 and dedication
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person
 can achieve
there
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their
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 goals
evenetally
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eventually
.
For example
, when you
are build
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 skinny and weak, building up strength will take a
person
 longer,
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 someone who is naturally strong. But, through going to the gym
regulier
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regularly
 the
person
 is still able to get strong, it will just take the individual a longer
time
.
Also
, nowadays through new machines and newly developed training
methords
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methods
,
people
 are able to train effectively and achieve goals in
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 similar
time
then
 naturally
talanted
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talented
people
.
Such
 as
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 new weight machines that support movements in a way that the
trageted
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targeted
 muscles, get trained more intensely.
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Therefore
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, through hard
work
, new exercising machines and training
methords
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methods
people
 who are not naturally amazing at a
hobbie
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hobby
 can still achieve the same
level
 as a gifted
person
. In conclusion, it has been discussed if children
how
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who
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 are not
naturelly
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naturally
 gifted at a
hobbie
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hobby
 are able to achieve the same
level
 as a child who is gifted at a talent. In my
opinion
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opinion,
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 the strongest reason, supporting my view on the topic, is that through hard
work
 and dedication everything is achievable, as I have experienced
this
 on my own.
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