Many people argue that in order to improve educational equality, high school students are encourage to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Students

around the world are mostly required to show some respect toward their teachers.

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some people

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some equality between that relationship but there are

also

some people who reject that idea.

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essay will discuss both

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opinions and I personally support that

students

are encouraged to show their criticism and make comments. Encouraging

students

to think critically will not only enhance their understanding better but

also

can build up their

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to be brave in stating their

opionion

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opinion

opinions

in public. Even though it seems impossible for these educators and

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educators

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to be in

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equal position in some cultures

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it can benefit the

students

a lot.

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, it was found that rather than just

listening

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the study material passively, high

schooler

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schoolers

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will learn better when they are actively learning by having some

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discussions

or even

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with their tutor regarding the subject.

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equal relationship will make the

students

to be

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more courageous in stating their

opinion

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opinions

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during the class as they

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their teachers as someone who can accept their opinions well.

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a better

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a better eduaction system

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education

systems where the

students

are active learners. High school

students

in

majority

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are showing more reserved

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class and

this

mostly

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caused by the teaching that

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done by their culture.

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, mostly in Asian countries, class sessions are where teachers

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student

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students

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without being interrupted. They are expected to be quiet and showing a sign of criticism will mark them as

disrespect

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disrespectful

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sign towards the

elder

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.

However

,

this

might cause the children to develop a

coward

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personality where they are afraid to state their opinion. It is

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best if

this

high schooler

still

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able to give their opinion freely but is still

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how to show some respect toward their tutors. in conclusion,

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high schoolers thinking critically can

shapen

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their ways of thinking and

therefore

become

an active learners

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active learners

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but

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while

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still showing some respect towards their teacher.