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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts the trend
on
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people
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 travelling to different areas in different time frames. Out of all five areas mentioned in the table, Europe is the most visited
area
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. It had a gradual increase from 280.2
million
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 travellers in 1990 to 400.2
million
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 travellers in 2005. The Least
area
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visitied
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visited
 by
people
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 is
Middle
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the Middle
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 East with 9.8
million
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 in 1990 to 15.8
million
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 in 2005. There was a steep increase in all the five areas where the
people
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 travelled from 1990 to 1995.America had a decent variation from 80.5
million
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 in 1990 to 112.5
million
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 in 1995. After 2000,
People
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 travelling to America reduced from 118.2
million
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 to 113.2
million
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 in 2005. Asia and
Pacific
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the Pacific
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 saw a constant
raise
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rise
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 in amount of travellers.
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, Africa saw a decent crowd of
people
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 flocking
into
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 them from 18.2
million
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 in 1990 to 28.7
million
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 in 2005. In every half decade mentioned,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East is the least travelled
area
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 with Europe occupying the most travelled
area
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, area, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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