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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table depicts the trend
on
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of
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people
 travelling to different areas in different time frames. Out of all five areas mentioned in the table, Europe is the most visited
area
. It had a gradual increase from 280.2
million
 travellers in 1990 to 400.2
million
 travellers in 2005. The Least
area
visitied
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visited
 by
people
 is
Middle
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the Middle
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 East with 9.8
million
 in 1990 to 15.8
million
 in 2005. There was a steep increase in all the five areas where the
people
 travelled from 1990 to 1995.America had a decent variation from 80.5
million
 in 1990 to 112.5
million
 in 1995. After 2000,
People
 travelling to America reduced from 118.2
million
 to 113.2
million
 in 2005. Asia and
Pacific
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the Pacific
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 saw a constant
raise
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rise
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 in amount of travellers.
Similarly
, Africa saw a decent crowd of
people
 flocking
into
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to
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 them from 18.2
million
 in 1990 to 28.7
million
 in 2005. In every half decade mentioned,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East is the least travelled
area
 with Europe occupying the most travelled
area
.
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