The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971-2007

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971-2007
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971-2007
The line graph represents the ownership of
cars
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between 1971 and 2007 in Great Britain.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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households
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of households
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that use a
couple
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of
cars
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regularly increases in the given period.
However
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, the
percentage
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of
households
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having no
cars
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initially
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falls,
while
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usage of single and more than a
couple
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cars
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fluctuated. The
households
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which were not using any car
initially
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was around 48%.
This
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percentage
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has been falling year by year, and by the end of the given
period
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period,
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it reaches approximately 25%.
On the other hand
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, the
households
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, who were using a
couple
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of
cars
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regularly, show the opposite trend.
Initially
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, it was just over 7.5%, reaching 10
percent
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per cent
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by the year 1975 and hovered till 1979 before started increasing to around 25% in 2007.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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of
households
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with single and more than a
couple
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of
cars
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were around 44% and 1%, respectively. These trends have fluctuated, and ended up approximately at 43% and 7%, in 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, percentage, households, couple with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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