You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
This
process diagram shows how a plastic
container
can be used to turn everyday
waste
into compost at home. In the first step, a large plastic
container
with a volume of two metric cubes should be prepared. The
container
must have holes on the sides in order to allow air circulation.
Next,
everyday
waste
is added to the jar. The ideal amount of
waste
is a combination of equal proportions of grass and food and a small addition of newspaper. If the jar used has measurements similar to that in the diagram, that would about to about 15cm of grass and 15cm of food with a bit of newspaper. The sequence of the
waste
disposal is not indicated, but it is essential
to
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not to overfill with
waste
and leave plenty of space.
Then
, additional ingredients are added to
faciliate
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facilitate
the composting process. The recommended additions are
nitrogren
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nitrogen
and water. It is crucial to make sure that the water is hot in order to allow the magic to happen. After that, the top of the
container
is sealed and set aside to allow the heat to escape through the air holes
while
the composting begins. In the final step, the results are shown after about six months. Compared to the image in
previous
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steps, the size of the particles in the compost is much smaller and the volume is less. Now the compost is ready to be used in the garden.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words container, waste with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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