The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the diagram gives us information about
Correct article usage
the recycleing

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recycleing
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recycling

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of organic
trashy
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trash

The word trashy doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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to reproduce garden compost ,
overall
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

it can be seen that there are 5
Use synonyms
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

stage
Change to a plural noun
stages

The singular noun stage follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.

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to
produce
Wrong verb form
producing

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb produce. Consider changing it.

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garden
fetlizer
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fertilisers

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by
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling

The verb recycle may be in the wrong form after the preposition by. Consider changing it to the gerund form.

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unusfull
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unuseful

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objects . first of all . we
starte
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started
start

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by
useing
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using

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Correct article usage
an apalstic
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apalstic
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aplastic
plastic
a plastic

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container size 2m,
that
Correct word choice
apply

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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it
Correct pronoun usage
which

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has some holes , in the second
stage
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

we put some
wast
Correct your spelling
waste

The word wast doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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goods
in to
Join the words
into

It appears that the two words in and to should be one word.

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the container ,
such
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

as food in the bottom
by
Change preposition
of

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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15 cm ,grass for
meddle
Correct your spelling
middle

The word meddle doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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of the
bottel
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bottle

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by the same amount and
newspapre
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newspaper
newspapers

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to top of the
bottel
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bottle

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,
then
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

in the third
stage
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

, we add water
also
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

nitrogen ,after that we are in the 4
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

stage
Change to a plural noun
stages

The singular noun stage follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.

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we need heat the container for a
whiles
Correct the article-noun agreement
while

The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun whiles in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.

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, after 6 months , we get garden compost in the depth of bottle .

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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