You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
the diagram gives us information about
Correct article usage
the recycleing
recycleing
of organic Correct your spelling
recycling
trashy
to reproduce garden compost , Correct your spelling
trash
overall
it can be seen that there are 5 stage
to Change to a plural noun
stages
produce
garden Wrong verb form
producing
fetlizer
by Correct your spelling
fertilisers
recycle
Change the verb form
recycling
unusfull
objects .
first of all . we Correct your spelling
unuseful
starte
byCorrect your spelling
started
start
useing
Correct your spelling
using
Correct article usage
an apalstic
apalstic
container size 2m,Correct your spelling
aplastic
plastic
a plastic
that
Correct word choice
apply
it
has some holes , in the second Correct pronoun usage
which
stage
we put some wast
goods Correct your spelling
waste
in to
the container ,Join the words
into
such
as food in the bottom by
15 cm ,grass for Change preposition
of
meddle
of the Correct your spelling
middle
bottel
by the same amount and Correct your spelling
bottle
newspapre
to top of the Correct your spelling
newspaper
newspapers
bottel
, Correct your spelling
bottle
then
in the third stage
, we add water also
nitrogen ,after that we are in the 4 stage
we need heat the container for a Change to a plural noun
stages
whiles
, after 6 months , we get garden compost in the depth of bottle .Correct the article-noun agreement
while
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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