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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
#minutes #waste #garden #fertilizer #compost #summaries #information #features #comparisons
the diagram gives us information about
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the recycleing
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recycleing
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recycling
 of organic
trashy
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trash
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 to reproduce garden compost ,
overall
 it can be seen that there are 5
stage
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stages
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 to
produce
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producing
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garden
fetlizer
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fertilisers
 by
recycle
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recycling
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unusfull
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unuseful
 objects . first of all . we
starte
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started
start
 by
useing
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using
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an apalstic
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apalstic
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aplastic
plastic
a plastic
 container size 2m,
that
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apply
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it
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which
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 has some holes , in the second
stage
 we put some
wast
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waste
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 goods
in to
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into
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 the container ,
such
 as food in the bottom
by
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of
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 15 cm ,grass for
meddle
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middle
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 of the
bottel
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bottle
by the same amount and
newspapre
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newspaper
newspapers
 to top of the
bottel
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bottle
,
then
 in the third
stage
 , we add water
also
 nitrogen ,after that we are in the 4
stage
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stages
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we need heat the container for a
whiles
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while
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, after 6 months , we get garden compost in the depth of bottle .
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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