Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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children

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development

, opinions differ among viewers. Some

people

hold the angle that the perfect time

children

experience is before they go to

school

. Other

people

show their view that experiences should be gained when they are

adolesents

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adolescents

because it will have

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impact on them. In my point of view,

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agree with both of

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argument

arguments

and

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will give an explanation for that. On the one hand, there are some advantages for

children

if they can

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experience

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early

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it early

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. When being at home, juveniles could be taught survival skills

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their family.

This

will help them to

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avoid

dangerous things, accidents or even worsen

such

as

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catastrophes

catastrophic

,

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and disaters

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disaters

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disasters

in real life. It will play an important role

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protecting them in the future.

Additionally

,

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extracurricular

for individuals before joining

school

can figure out their talents, strengths or weaknesses. These things will likely

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orientate their courses and majors when they grow up.

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,

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beieve

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believe

the option to

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experiencing

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to experience

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during the

teenagers

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age

also

has

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impact on them.

Firstly

,

this

is the time that they are mature enough to understand

theirself

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themselves

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,

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, they will know what is suitable for

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them

and might not need other

supports

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from

people

around

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around them

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.

Secondly

, the

school

eviroment

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environment

train students

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in softs

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softs

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soft

skill without

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a fee

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.

For example

comunicating

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communicating

with their friends,

negotating

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negotiating

with their teachers, solving

problem

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problems

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,

ect

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etc

. It is these daily behaviours when they study at

school

and they need to find the right methods for each of

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these

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. After

long

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a long

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time, these can create their manners and

harmorny

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harmony

temperament in students. It could be

usefull

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useful

for their working

eviroment

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environment

after that. In conclusion,

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believe that

people

should let their

children

having

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experience as

many

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as possible no

mater

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matter

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when before or after going to

school