The table gives information about department and online stores in Australia in 2011.
The diagram displays the data of the Number of businesses, profit, sales revenue, and growth of
department
Use synonyms
stores
and online Use synonyms
stores
in Australia for the year 2011.
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overall
, it is readily apparent that online Linking Words
stores
in Australia are a greater success than Use synonyms
department
Use synonyms
stores
. They have a slightly higher value in all 4 categories. Use synonyms
However
, Sales revenue stands out the most in online Linking Words
stores
.
In terms of the Number of businesses, online Use synonyms
stores
have more, at around 368 businesses with a growth Use synonyms
at
6%. Change preposition
of
In contrast
, Linking Words
Department
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stores
have a smaller number of Use synonyms
retails
in Australia, around 67, and have a slightly lower percentage of growth than E-commerce, at 4%.
In comparison, chain Replace the word
retailers
stores
and E-businesses have sufficient profit at 807AUD and 863AUD respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the sales revenue of online Linking Words
stores
is more significant (13,400AUD) than the Use synonyms
department
Use synonyms
stores
(12,700AUD)Use synonyms
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