The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The graph compares the
number
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of visitors who came to a Caribbean island over the period of seven years( 2010-2017).
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the total
number
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of tourists, visiting Caribbean islands always increased during the given period.
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, the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower than that
those
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of those
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who decided to choose to stay on the island. Looking at the highest rate, the total
number
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of newcomers was exactly 1
million
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in 2010, before increasing slightly to
2.5millions
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2.5 million
in 2014 and
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figure remained stable at around 2.7
million
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in the following year, before reaching a peak at 3.5
million
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in 2017. Turning to the lower rates, people who chose cruise ships mostly experienced a level off in 2010, 2011 and from 2013 to 2015 (1.5
million
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) and witnessed a small drop in 2016, but increased to 1.5
million
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in the following year.
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the
number
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of travellers staying on the island was lower than 1
million
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till 2014,
however
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,
this
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rate showed a slight increase till the end of the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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