The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph compares the
number
of visitors who came to a Caribbean island over the period of seven years( 2010-2017).
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Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the total Linking Words
number
of tourists, visiting Caribbean islands always increased during the given period. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower than that Linking Words
those
who decided to choose to stay on the island.
Looking at the highest rate, the total Change preposition
of those
number
of newcomers was exactly 1 Use synonyms
million
in 2010, before increasing slightly to Use synonyms
2.5millions
in 2014 and Correct your spelling
2.5 million
this
figure remained stable at around 2.7 Linking Words
million
in the following year, before reaching a peak at 3.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017.
Turning to the lower rates, people who chose cruise ships mostly experienced a level off in 2010, 2011 and from 2013 to 2015 (1.5 Use synonyms
million
) and witnessed a small drop in 2016, but increased to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
in the following year. Use synonyms
While
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number
of travellers staying on the island was lower than 1 Use synonyms
million
till 2014, Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
this
rate showed a slight increase till the end of the given period.Linking Words
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