In many countries, people are changing career with increasing number. What are the reasons and do you think it is negative or positive development?

Nowadays, competition has been
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and global child is competing with child
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every corner of the world. It is believed that amount of people who tends to
change
their
career
are significantly increasing.
This
essay intends to discuss the
reasons
behind changing
career
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careers
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and I firmly believe that it is a negative development. There are many
reasons
why individuals prefer to alter their
career
stream.
To begin
with,
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of mind or
change
of interest plays an important role in every
individuals
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. To explain, a recent business management graduate got a job in
consultancy
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a consultancy
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company - Deloitte. After
spening
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spending
6 Months, if it is not
field
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a field
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of his interest, he might get bored and
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may think of opting
career
change
. It is said that almost 50% of graduates
tends
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to
change
their
field
after spending
significant
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amount of time in
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field
. What is more, students are being
presurised
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pressurised
pressurized
pressured
by peers in terms of selecting
education
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an education
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stream. Peers see them as income
source
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sources
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and neglect their personal
interest
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interests
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.
Hence
, students are forced to study the
field
which they are not interested in and once they get a job in the same
field
, they easily give up after
couple
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of years. I
preceive
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perceived
Changing
career
after spending
couple
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of years as a negative development. There are so many
reasons
for that.
Firstly
, it requires a lot of time to gain knowledge of any new
field
.
Secondly
, one would be seen as a fresher for
new
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stream and they possess low chances of selection compared to those who have already done their studies in that specified
field
.
Thirdly
, one may feel anxiety, depression or mental pressure
while
changing
field
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fields
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. To elaborate, an accountant can not handle business and in case he changes his
minds
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to
handle
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business, he will
more
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likely to have anxiety as he
possess
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entirely different skills than required for
Businessman
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a Businessman
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.
To conclude
, there are many
reasons
for changing
career
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however
they can be tackled and in my perspective,
career
change
should be refrained and one should select
career
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a career
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after exploring their own choices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job displacement
  • job insecurity
  • fulfilling
  • meaningful
  • work-life balance
  • flexibility
  • career options
  • opportunities
  • acquire new skills
  • knowledge
  • rapidly changing economy
  • social media
  • role models
  • entrepreneurship
  • self-employment
  • COVID-19 pandemic
  • passions
  • interests
  • instability
  • uncertainty
  • workforce
  • career planning
  • professional development
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