The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents

The chart illustrates the

number

of vehicles made by residents and non-residents entering the city centre during the past ten

years

.

Overall

, it can be

seem

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seen

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from the chart that in the first four

years

, the

number

of

cars

increased almost to the limit and began

decreased

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moderately after the parking meters were introduced. Regarding trips by

non-residents

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non-residents,

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the

number

increased only with the presence of parking meters.

Firstly

, the average

number

of

cars

by residents reached more than 9,000 in

years

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1996, 1997, 1998,

1999

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and 1999

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.

Besides

that, when the parking meters were introduced, the

number

of

cars

reduced gradually to 5,000 and

has

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decreased slightly even more in 2004 with the

number

3,500.

In addition

, the

number

of vehicles by non-residents

growth

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rapidly from 5,000 in 1996 to more than 8,000 in 1999. And after that continued to maintain the

number

around 8000 in

years

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the years

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2000, 2001, 2002. In

years

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the years

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2003 when West

street

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Street

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and Park Lane were closed to traffic, the

number

of

cars

into

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the city centre dropped sharply to 3,000 in 2003

then

increased minimally more than 3,000 in 2004 and

last

in 2005 the

number

reached nearly 5,000.