Some people think that tourism is one of the helpful ways to increase a countries state. However, others believe that tourism can only damage traditional rules bringing own affect to a society and cause other troubles. To what extent do you agree with?

In the contemporary era, tourism is a very important financial source for

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countries

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. Some

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believe

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that

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would improve the land situation

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others see it as a

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threat

to

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traditional wealth. In my front of view, tourism is an

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economic

factor for

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quality of population lives. I will elaborate on my perspective in the following paragraphs. To commence with, visitors who come to different countries contribute to

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its economic situation .

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, many cities which have

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breathtaking landscapes or unique religious

locatoins

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locations

would be the

denstination

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destination

of

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amount of tourists and when those reach their

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destination

, they would buy meals or snacks there or variable small pieces for memory and spend not a

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amount of

moneny

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money

there.

On the other hand

, some

beilive

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believe

that strangers may affect negatively the civilization of the specific area by

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damaging

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traditional rules,

for instance

, visitors may act or dress in a different way than locals something that would be

cirtified

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certified

by older residents on one hand and be cited by the

youngersts

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youngest

on the other hand

and by

this

to change the familiar way of lifestyle.

To conclude

, I think that tourism has much more

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pros

than coins, but locals may do their efforts to keep their own rules and at the same time

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enjoy the financial advantages of living in

such

attractive places.