The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts
comprise of
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British citizen expenditure in two different years which are 1971 and 2001.
Overall
, in 1971, most
people
in the UK
like
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liked
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to
spent
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spend
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their money on
food
, which is opposed to their behaviour 3 decades later which
is
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in 2001,
people
tend
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tended
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to
spent
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spend
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their salary by
bought
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buying
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cars
.
In addition
, in the prior period
given
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(
1971)
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1971),
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only a
little
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small
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portion of
people
spent
out
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apply
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their money on computers. Meanwhile in 2001, buying a book
is
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seemingly became unpopular those days. In 1971,
Food
became the most spent item with 44% which is
a
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half of
percentage
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the percentage
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of
people
spent on bought
cars
. Citizen expenditure on
cars
rate is more than twice of petrol being bought back
then
in 1971, which is 10%. Closely followed by furniture which has the
equal
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same
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amount rate as restaurants for 7% and books for 6%. The least spending of
people
in the UK is on computers, with the fact that these things may be unpopular in that year. As opposed to what happened in 2001,
people
mostly spent their salary on
cars
following
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followed
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with
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by
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the huge difference rate spent
in
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on
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food
and restaurants by 29%, which
are
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is
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14%. Computer
spent is
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spending
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rapidly rose from 2% in 1971 to 12% in 2001.
On the other hand
,
along with
the
increased
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increase
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from
cars
and
computer
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computers
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spent, there are the remaining categories
people
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of people
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least spent with, which are furniture,
food
, and books for 8%, 8%, and 1% respectively.
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