The pie charts show the spending habits of people in UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts
comprise of
British citizen expenditure in two different years which are 1971 and 2001. Verb problem
show
Overall
, in 1971, most people
in the UK like
to Wrong verb form
liked
spent
their money on Change the form of the verb
spend
food
, which is opposed to their behaviour 3 decades later which is
in 2001, Unnecessary verb
apply
people
tend
to Wrong verb form
tended
spent
their salary by Change the verb
spend
bought
Wrong verb form
buying
cars
. In addition
, in the prior period given
(Verb problem
apply
1971)
only a Add a comma
1971),
little
portion of Correct word choice
small
people
spent out
their money on computers. Meanwhile in 2001, buying a book Change preposition
apply
is
seemingly became unpopular those days.
In 1971, Unnecessary verb
apply
Food
became the most spent item with 44% which is a
half of Change the article
apply
percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
people
spent on bought cars
. Citizen expenditure on cars
rate is more than twice of petrol being bought back then
in 1971, which is 10%. Closely followed by furniture which has the equal
amount rate as restaurants for 7% and books for 6%. The least spending of Correct word choice
same
people
in the UK is on computers, with the fact that these things may be unpopular in that year.
As opposed to what happened in 2001, people
mostly spent their salary on cars
following
Wrong verb form
followed
with
the huge difference rate spent Change preposition
by
in
Change preposition
on
food
and restaurants by 29%, which are
14%. Computer Correct subject-verb agreement
is
spent is
rapidly rose from 2% in 1971 to 12% in 2001. Wrong verb form
spending
On the other hand
, along with
the increased
from Replace the word
increase
cars
and computer
spent, there are the remaining categories Fix the agreement mistake
computers
people
least spent with, which are furniture, Change preposition
of people
food
, and books for 8%, 8%, and 1% respectively.Submitted by baitynuris191 on
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