Some people think that there should be change while others not.write its advantage and disadvantage.
It is argued that our communities and industrial situation need to be changed, or keep doing traditional life.
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discussion is one of the longest differences between the opinions of right and left-wing. Linking Words
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, a crucial thing to know about anybody's idea in politics is his position on changes and innovation. So, we should weigh the advantages and disadvantages of any side.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that human beings, without innovation and creating new opportunities, could not progress in quality of life. Linking Words
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, the Industrial Revolution, with its effects on the efficacy of manufacturing, has changed our welfare and healthcare since about 300 years ago. Linking Words
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, a huge amount of damage to nature and societal relations obviously has affected the health of many species. Linking Words
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point of climate crisis tells us that we have to take the benefits of technology mindfully. Any change may have its disadvantages.
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, the improvement of any society depends on its flexibility in science, economics and politics. Linking Words
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centuries. Everybody can imagine life without the internet, and new communication can be like a disaster. Our generation has known a crisis like COVID-19. Linking Words
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, we have experienced many fluctuations in the economy. They show us which is important for the future, improvement or conservationism?
In conclusion, a historical challenge has been in our political and societal aspects on changes and flexibility since the first days of civilisation. Linking Words
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, we have been living in an era when anything may be changed after a few years. Seemingly, we will be focusing on the drawbacks of innovation and modernisation, which means that we need a simple path of balance between stability and experiencing new things.Linking Words
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