The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The pie charts provide information about the proportion of the Canadian and Australian
population
in terms of civil
status
. It is noticeable that in Canada, there are six
status
categories,
by contrast
, Australia
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not have same-sex
marriage
,
thus
only five marital
status
are shown in the chart.
While
in both countries a larger portion of the
population
is either separated or married, the percentage of other
status
categories is relatively small. In Canada, more than half (53%) of the married
population
are not living together but are not legally separated.
While
the proportion of married people in Canada only
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29% of the total
population
, the majority of Australians are bonded by
marriage
46%. Separated individuals in Australia comprise 41% of the whole
population
. The remaining 13% of Australian people are either single, widowed or legally separated.
Furthermore
, the single and widowed Canadian citizens are proportional at 7%. A marginal portion of 3% in
this
country are in homosexual
marriage
. Australia,
on the other hand
,
do
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not have individuals involved in same-sex
marriage
.
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