70.The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The map displays the plan for a housing
area
for workers and a new factory complex.
The Use synonyms
area
is large, with many housing and industrial Use synonyms
areas
and several roads. Use synonyms
Also
, different Linking Words
areas
for individuals to socialize are added .
There is a Use synonyms
road
in the Use synonyms
middle
of the plan, which separates the north and the south side, and there is another Use synonyms
road
which comes from the north to the south, all these roads are linked to an industrial Use synonyms
area
, which is situated in the Use synonyms
middle
of the plan. Use synonyms
Also
, there is a circular Linking Words
road
which links the other roads, so drivers can change from Use synonyms
one
Use synonyms
road
and another, and do not need to pass through the industrial Use synonyms
area
.
There are three housing Use synonyms
areas
, Use synonyms
one
in the north-west, which has parking nearby, another in the north-east, beside a swimming pool, and Use synonyms
one
in the south-west. There are only two industrial Use synonyms
areas
, Use synonyms
one
in the southeast and the other in the Use synonyms
middle
of the map. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, inside the circular Linking Words
road
in the Use synonyms
middle
of the map, there is an office in the northwest and a meeting room in the southeast.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, areas, road, middle, one with synonyms.
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