70.The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

70.The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The map displays the plan for a housing
area
for workers and a new factory complex. The
area
is large, with many housing and industrial
areas
and several roads.
Also
, different
areas
for individuals to socialize are added . There is a
road
in the
middle
of the plan, which separates the north and the south side, and there is another
road
which comes from the north to the south, all these roads are linked to an industrial
area
, which is situated in the
middle
of the plan.
Also
, there is a circular
road
which links the other roads, so drivers can change from
one
road
and another, and do not need to pass through the industrial
area
. There are three housing
areas
,
one
in the north-west, which has parking nearby, another in the north-east, beside a swimming pool, and
one
in the south-west. There are only two industrial
areas
,
one
in the southeast and the other in the
middle
of the map.
Furthermore
, inside the circular
road
in the
middle
of the map, there is an office in the northwest and a meeting room in the southeast.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, areas, road, middle, one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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