the provided bar chart illustrates how many peoole drinked coffe and bought tea as well as drinking habits in five Australian towns.

the bar graph depicts

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information about the amount of

coffee

and tea which were the main habits of residents

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purchasing and consuming in five different parts of Australia over the

last

four weeks after analysing the graph it is clearly seen that the five cities excluding

the

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Adelaide had crossed 50% of the pupils who went to a cafe for

coffee

or tea

whereas

Adelaid

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Adelaide

has the lowest

in

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proportion approximately equal to 40%

in contrast

people who

brought

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a

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instant

coffee

from the cities of Brisbane Adelaide and

hobart

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had major figure close to 50%

while

that brought from Sydney and Melbourne had lower in the ratio

furthermore

, the percentage of fresh

coffee

bought from Sydney

melbourne

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and Hobert show an inclined trend touching almost 40% or above whilst Brisban and Adelaide had

few

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visitors than the rest of the cities in Australia nearly equal to 35%

overall

, it is vividly seen that Melbourne had

a

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highest number of people who went to a cafe for

coffee

or tea whilst for

the

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fresh

coffee

brisban

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Brisban

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city had

lowest

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in

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percentage