The chart below shows the total number of international migrants in five countries between 2000 and 2020. The table shows the percentage of migrants in each country’s population in 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The bar graph shows how the amount of international
migrants
in Germany, India, Russia, the UK and the USA has changed from 2000 to 2020, while
the percentage share
of migrants
in the population
in 2020 is shown in the table.
Overall
, the amount of foreign people increased in the USA, the Uk
and Germany, where the proportion of Correct your spelling
UK
migrants
was higher. The two countries with the lowest share
of foreign-born citizens were Russia and India, whose amounts remained the same and decreased, respectively.
It is clear that
three
countries witnessed Correct article usage
the three
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of
their foreign community. Notably, the largest one was always in the USA, where the number rose Change preposition
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up
by approximately 15 million people. Change preposition
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Although
, the country with the largest share
(14.7%) of migrants
in the national population
in 2020 was Germany, immediately followed by the UK with its population
made up of 14% foreigners, around 5 million migrants
more than 20 years later
In contrast
, after 20 years, Russia had the same number of them while
India'
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India
s
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one
slightly declined, having the smallest Correct pronoun usage
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share
in the national population
in 2020 (0.4%)Submitted by marianiculescu1103 on
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