The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar graph compares the total of
families
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in five different income levels in 2007, 2011, and 2015. In general, the number of
families
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in all income levels increased gradually over the period, despite one category remained unchanged. In detail, houses in the range of $100,000 or more, which is the majority of the population, had experienced an upward from almost 30
million
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in 2007 to over 32
million
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in 2015, except for a small dip in 2011.
Likewise
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, the number of
families
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with salaries less than $25,000 rose gradually from 25
million
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to around 27
million
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in the same period.
On the other hand
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,
families
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with an income level of $25,000-$49,999 had increased steadily from around 26
million
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in 2007 to almost 30
million
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in 2015.
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,
families
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in the range of $75,000-$99,999, which is the smallest population, rose steadily to 15
million
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in the same year.
However
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,
while
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the other four categories had increased,
families
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with the range of $50,000-$74,999 stayed constant at around 21
million
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during the periods
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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